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Well ive given up now... There was more of it coloured but my imageready just keeps crashing every 10 seconds when i try to add anything to it.. :(

so this is my final piece for my college project.... it could have been better, but it was fun trying animation....

I had no lessons in it.. i just sort of winged it XD as its very noticable, but I learnt from it.

Its only about 9 frames a second. 8C i was gonna bulk it out but i didnt have enough time.. it was technicly due last week... ah well, i tried. XD
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72 frames - all drawn on paper first, started colouring on photoshop but the computers couldnt take it XD

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Big S, Eugene, Nancy & Astaire (Wingdings) (c) Me

Critiques


:iconjennytablina:
For a first try at animation its great! You still were able to tell a story from it despite length and though the animation is low on frames theres some really good points, I like the little background animation of Astaire and the expressions in the last scene along with the stretch on Eugene as he's picked up.

The only thing is the walk cycle Raygirl mentioned and the dimensions of Eugene's face as when he turned it kind of went off model a little.

Though it inspires me to work at my summer projects this year. This is a good example of how much progress someone can make if they just put their mind to it.
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:iconraygirl:
This animation has some really lovely parts that i would love to have seen more of. I don't know how much animation training you have had but to have the patience to stick this through is excellent, and you can really see the skills improving as the animation goes on. There are some really tough parts that even as a trained animator I would be nervous about attempting, such as the perspective shot of the character walking away from the camera into the distance.

My only concern is the walk cycles at the beginning (especially the stork) but walk cycles are a BITCH to animate, especially if the characters aren't human and not constrained by normal preportions.

I love Nancy's reactions, I think they're my favorite part. I'm not sure what the settings of this scene are but some lovely hand painted backgrounds would add a full 200% to the quality of this film :D Overall it's a cute little scene, it shows the personalities of the characters beautifully, and even through it's short it tells a clear story!
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:icondotewakko94:
It's very very nice animaton!!! Bleah i don't know make the animation!!!!:(:(:(:(:( *Sigh*

(my orrible english)
:iconzombifiedarbok:
I'll be honest with you, I prefer the sketched frames than the colored. I don't know why, really, but I do.
I especially like Eugene at the end, when he's being picked up by Big S. 8D

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"3044 sneezed; I sneezed back in response." - ???

"Oh my, Yakko, is that some baloney in your slacks or are you just happy to see me?" - Arbok
:iconneonhaven:
aww its so cute :D
you gonna colour in the rest?

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i'm gonna shove it, and love it, and dance around all above it ;)
:iconpirpintine:
you clearly dont read do you.

i coloured most of it but my computer couldnt cope with me putting coloured frames in and kept crashing.

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... and that's why I'm not allowed to wear hats anymore.
:iconneonhaven:
that sucks
you not gonna do more at college?

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i'm gonna shove it, and love it, and dance around all above it ;)
:iconwanerbro7:
that was highly cool!
:+fav: i like the end the best but overall you did a great job!!

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Buster: Take away your props and costumes; what would you be?
Babs: Naked.

by the time you finish reading this, you'll realize it was completely pointless
:iconpirpintine:
my computers are better than the college ones... if mine cant cope with it, then colleges certainly wont XD

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... and that's why I'm not allowed to wear hats anymore.
:iconpirpintine:
thank you! :D i like the end bit best too XD

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... and that's why I'm not allowed to wear hats anymore.
:icondarkshadow1000:
Wow, thats amazing! the animation is really smooth, and the colours stand out nice :) great work!

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